Shikra

[ali azadi]

Hi

Camera Model Canon EOS 7D
Lens Canon EF 300mm f2.8 L IS USM+1.4 TC
Tv( Shutter Speed ) 1/3200
Av( Aperture Value ) 6.3
ISO Speed 400



Thanks for looking.

[Randy Stout]

Ali:

Your bird is sharp and well exposed, with good colors in the background.

Great eye contact.

The perch a rather dominant image component because of its size and brightness.

If the image quality will tolerate, a tighter vertical crop with a bit off the bottom to downplay the impact of the perch, and a moderate amount off the top to balance it, might work well here.

Cheers

Randy

[jack williamson]

Good points by Randy. I like the back view and that head turn, fine exposure and very sharp.

Jack

[Daniel Cadieux]

I too was going to suggest a more vertical comp if the IQ can take it. Nice look-back pose. Did you work on the background? Looks like I see a faint horizontal clone mark top right...

[ali azadi]

thanks your comments guys.yes daniel ,I did.I removed and cleaned anything it wasn't necessary to be in the BG,is there problem with it?

[arash_hazeghi]

Very nice pose and BG. Good details. Perch is a bit overpowering but it's not bad. BG can use some NR and I'd sharpen up the head a tad more. Ditto Dan on the clone mark. I think it would work better in a 3X2 vert.

TFS handsome raptor

[ali azadi]

ok.thnks arash

[jack williamson]

When you are cloning if your clone selection area gets into the edge of the image it will actually clone the edge into your image and that is what has happened here.

Jack

[ali azadi]

Hi jack.thank u for ur precious help and explanation i do appreciate them