You did well with the exposure and positioning of the bird here. The image lacks "pop" as it is too low in contrast. In my repost I did a local contrast enhancement using USM at 30-60-0. That caused some whites to overexposure but if you increase the contrast during your post-processing on a tiff and not as I have done to the JPG you can avoid that. Either a more aggressive s-curve or using the method I did.
Love the sharpness and COMP in the ORIG. Robert's fix was an improvement but I believe that the soft look was from too much SH/H or an underexposed ORIG that was otherwise lightened.... If the former, the solution is to increase the midtone contrast in SH/H to about 8-12 after making the SH ADJ.
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