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    Hello everyone. Here is another shot of these beautiful birds. This one kept on eye on me while trying to nap.
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    Hi Robert. Excellent image of one of my favorite birds. The reflection, IMHO, doesn't add anything and, in fact, draws the eye away from the avocet. You might consider cropping a bunch off the bottom.

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    Excellent POV and I like the layered BG. I am not crazy about the composition and would add more up top and crop off the bottom. I like the exposure on the whites and blacks and the reflection of the water on the belly.
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    Beautiful colors in the bird; lovely bg. Great low shooting angle. Another vote for taking a little off the bottom. On my screen it seems the eye could take a tiny bit more USM.

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    Robert you have captured nice image...love the low angle, sharpness and BG...I think composition wise I would move it slightly towards our right as it looks very close to the left edge.

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    Beautiful and colorful image. Sharp and well composed.

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    Hi Robert, I like the sleepy pose, light and overall colours, as well as the water reflection on the belly. Good DOF on the avocet, and you have created a nice low perspective. Comp wise, I would just take off the bottom. Well captured.

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    Very nice low angle, great colors and I'm with the crop from the bottom add to the top club :)

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    Thank you all very much for all the comments and advice. Greatly appreciated.
    Here is repost with less on the bottom and a tad on top.

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