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    Default Chestnut collared Sparrow

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    Created in the gardens of Savegre Mountain Lodge, Costa Rica

    Bit tight but still pretty; was shot close/tight. Love the flower species, anyone know what it is?

    Cute birds and glad I got a shot of them though they are common

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    Richard I have never seen one before..nice setting and IQ looks great the perch shows advent of spring season...Sparrow is little too big in frame for my taste...I would back out on sharpening a bit...

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    Beautiful subject with a nice pose and HA. Agree with it being to tight in the frame and a tad over sharpen
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    Nice perch, bg & sharp subject. Love the feather details there. Sparrow looks bigger that its size.

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    Hi

    OK had another creative (lol) g; as I said was shot a bit close. I have added to top and bottom, and reduced SS

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    Last edited by Richard Unsworth; 04-02-2012 at 11:22 AM.

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    Even with the repost, I still find the bird too tight in the frame. The head angle is also not ideal, where a look more downward and to the right (your left), would have strengthened this image greatly. Sharpness and background look good on the repost, but the plant obstructing the tail is distracting.

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    Points noted Ryan, thank you for your critique
    (things to think on next time) - not to worry though I have many more

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    Nice head turn, excellent details.

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    Interesting looking bird with lovely colors. Other than tail also a nice clean shot with lovely bg. Repost looks better although I might add a bit on right as well. Good for you to get a bird you wanted.

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    Hi Richard,
    repost is better. I can see some cloning marks in LLC and under bird's right foot.. I know you love the flower but it overpowers the bird and hides the tail. Please show us some more of this lovely bird,
    Gail

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    Beautiful portrait, great details and eye contact.

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