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    I was on the fishing pier photographing the sunset when it started sprinkling. The gal who was fishing on the pier, seen on the right, kept on fishing. I made a couple of photos focusing on the raindrops. I found a cool texture with the cracks today on flickr and added it.

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    I really like the colors and the raindrops. And the top rail of the fence is perfectly placed in terms of composition. The cracks seems like a good idea, too, but I'd be tempted to move the point from which the cracks radiate further away from the midwidth of the image. Probably to the left.

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    Judy, a very cool OOTB idea. I like the horizontal bands of color and just the perception of the person. Nicely done
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    Judy, You have been on a creative roll lately! Great OOTB thinking. Nice placement of your subject and the rainbow colors add to the image.

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    Thanks Dennis. I'll check into moving it.

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    Thanks Cheryl

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    Thanks Denise! The creativeness comes and goes and it's on right now. The photo was made last summer and I never did anything creative with it till now. I thought of it when the subject was people because it is one of the few I've made.

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    Here's a rework. Since the texture was small and I'd already stretched it a bit, I flipped it horizontal. I cloned out a few black things on the texture. I lightened the photo a little.

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    Interesting image and application, Judy.

    Nicely done.

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    Hi Judy, the repost works better for me. Love your creativity for this one. The colors in the sky are beautiful. Very nicely done

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