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    Topaz remask, B&W, simplify, and F.Pear's flood.

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    Nice composition, Mitch. I love all your sailboats... this one is no exception. I like the diagonal positioning and the trail behind. I also like the cloud and your use of flood. Very nice colors. Personally, I would prefer to eliminate the gull on the right. It seems to pull my eye away from the image. Excellent processing

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    Hi Mitch...nice job with this. You did a fine job getting the light to match and your remasking looks good. I agree that the bird on the right is not needed and it would be nice to see a hint of a horizon. Nice work!

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    The colors are beautiful and it's a captivating scene. Agree about the bird on the right.

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    almost magical. Beautifully done. Agree re the bird. Also, those bushes on the right don't seem to fit the overall image, to me.

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    Hi Mitch, I love the sailboat. There seems to be alot going on in a small space. I do wish the horizon line were a little more visible. Very creative.

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