I think for this one a bit more room in the FG bottom on the crop to show more water would be an asset to the image to better ground the floating ice.
I like the arc of the ice from the left, to right, up and back left - a good leading line. I like the sunlite FG and darker BG - adds depth to the image.
I love the textures and lines in these scapes. I agree with Robert, but having read your reply there's not much to be done. I do wonder if opening up the shadows a bit would be beneficial?