Went back and re photographed Took your comments on board ( Thank You) Hope this is better comments welcome
Grahame ( now see a couple of spots i missed)
Grahame, I always see things I miss after I post! Nice job with the additional room and the background. I do see a couple of white lines (I have a feeling you did too) in the URC and LLC. Also a few edges around the gosberry that need some refining. I did like the more golden tone of your last post. I think you really did a great job with this image. It is not an easy one to get right but with just a couple of tweaks and I think you have a winner.
This is beautiful, Graham. I definitely like the golden color and the space around makes it stand out. Agree with Denise on refining few of the edges... excellent work! TFS.
Thank you all for your help.I turned it into a landscape An think it improved it even though its natural look is portrait. working on the the edges
Grahame
I too love the textures, tones, and patterning in the leaf. I am thinking that there has to be a better composition but am at a loss to suggest one..... Maybe on the left side of a black horizontal frame....
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