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    Hi made spme modification by camera raw.
    What you think about?
    Now it better or not
    Thanks

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    Although it looks dark, it reflects a mood, so OK with me. The two out of focus in the upper left don't add anything to the picture for my taste.

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    Here is my suggestion. The histogram of this image clearly shows the need for a level adjustment (please try with the following values, whites 183, grey 1,16 black 0). You have to fix the white point too with the white eyedroper on the levels window. I added a little bit of saturation and another round of unsharp mask. The result is not very nice because I am working on a small jpeg. please try the suggestions on a large file.

    By the way, I almost forget to comment on the image. I am not sure about the out of focus birds in the background but the main group has a very nice action and pose that I love:)

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    I agree, not too crazy about the two out of focus birds, but I like the lightened repost a lot.

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    The repost is 100%. Also agree with the two out of focus birds in the upper left quadrant...Would suggest cloning them out...:cool:

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