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    Got this image a few weeks back the same day Itook my spill just a few minutes before this shot. Clouds blocked the sun for most of the first hour then I was blessed with a few minutes of break thru light and a glorious glow. This guy got so close to me in the water that I clipped the tail end. So I cropped to about mid body. Does this work? By the way how does my color management look?

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    NR and selective sharpening cropped to about 70% of original

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    I think you should crop more from the left. I would prefer to see no more than half of the body. The light is beautiful and love the water drops.

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    Cheryl:

    I agree with Laurie about the crop. I would crop from the left to the highest point of the back, and if you have any on the right, add that back in.

    Golden light plays well with the subdued blues of the water.

    The eye is great, and I like the slicked back do!

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    Quote Originally Posted by laurie golden View Post
    I think you should crop more from the left. I would prefer to see no more than half of the body. The light is beautiful and love the water drops.

    Thanks Laurie and Randy
    This is as much as feels comfortable to me.

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    Cheryl:

    You are the artist, and have to feel good about what you have created. I think this crop is an improvement over the original. I would put it aside, and look at it again in a week or so, and try other cropping options.

    Makes me miss my loons

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    Repost is really top notch, Cheryl. Could have been worth the spill?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Randy Stout View Post
    Cheryl:

    You are the artist, and have to feel good about what you have created. I think this crop is an improvement over the original. I would put it aside, and look at it again in a week or so, and try other cropping options.

    Makes me miss my loons

    Randy
    Thanks Randy and yes isn't that usually what we do? Over and over

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marina Scarr View Post
    Repost is really top notch, Cheryl. Could have been worth the spill?
    I'm thinkin for sure. It was an amazing day from that point. I wish you coulda seen the spill. You'd probably still be laughing

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    Really wonderful image. The light is just amazing, great pose, detail is top notch, and I like the repost.
    Very well done.

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    Hi Cheryl, trust you are happier with the colour now, have things improved to where you want it to be?

    I just wonder if dropping some of the warmth from the BKG it might work, just my 2 cents.

    All the best.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Kaluski View Post
    Hi Cheryl, trust you are happier with the colour now, have things improved to where you want it to be?

    I just wonder if dropping some of the warmth from the BKG it might work, just my 2 cents.

    All the best.

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    Steve you know I like your 2 cents. That works very nicely too and I did wonder if the warmth was too much. Thanks so much for your valuable time.

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    No worries, you are now on the right tracks for the future in your colour work now, just keep it up-to-date.

    Good luck.
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    Cheryl, great light indeed. loved the low angle, the drop and the latest crop.

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