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    One from my backyard blind.
    Topaz adjust, topaz clean, two Shadowhouse textures.

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    I very much like the colors throughout the image and the pose of the sparrow. The background is wonderful, too.

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    Hi maureen....I like the bg and the soft feather detail. You might try darkening the legs and feet just a bit.

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    Maureen, I love this. Great job with the sharpness and the textures. I might darken the perch a teeny bit if it were mine.

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    Thanks Dennis, Bob and Denise. Here is a reworked version incorporating your suggestions. Better?

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    Nice image and application, Maureen.

    Like the first one, but also the second!

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    I'm not sure about the legs and feet, but darkening the branch a bit was a good idea -- it helps to ground the image.

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    Hi Maureen;

    Love them both, but give the edge to #1 as it has a softness that is appealing to me.

    Super application.

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    The 2nd image is very good but there is a subtle brightness & clarity about the 1st one that appeals to me more. Bkgd textures are great.

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    I'd give 2 my vote because of the branch/feet redo. Beautiful bird. What data?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hazel Grant View Post
    I'd give 2 my vote because of the branch/feet redo. Beautiful bird. What data?
    Nikon D3s
    200-400mm f/4 + 1.4x @ 550mm
    ISO 800
    Manual mode f/8, 1/250

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    Interesting comments. Thanks.

    I was going for a softer look, so I prefer the OP. But I do also like the perch darker. So, I may rework this one again

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    Lovely composition, Maureen. I love the soft colors of the OP. Nicely done!

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