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    Default Hill Blue Flycatcher

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    D700
    300mm f/2.8G VR II with TC-20E III
    600mm
    ISO 1600
    f/6.3 at 1/125s
    Manual mode
    Matrix Metering
    AF-C, Single (Single was unintentional)
    Auto white balance
    Tripod

    Cropped from 4256x2832 to 1388x2041

    Lighten, linear burn on the chest, curve, increase vibrance, blur background, NR and sharpen.

    Male Hill Blue Flycatcher. The background is a bit busy.

    All comments and suggestions are welcome.

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    I see what you mean about the background. Maybe you could darken it a bit. Great pose.

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    Nice pose and a beautiful bird. Agree with toning down the background a little. Nice perch.

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    Nice bird

    bit tight on the left; if mine i would desat yellow in BG to tone down, lso needs a bit more space to right if you have it

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    Hi Thanaboon, I like the softer colours on the flycatcher, and you have captured a super pose. I like the crocked perch, and agree toning down the BG will work.

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    Lovely colours on this bloke. I would tone down some of the brighter parts of the bird as well - needs some midtone contrast IMHO.
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    Beautiful bird excellent detail and I like the bg a very nice composition as presented.

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    Thank you all for the comments and suggestion.

    Here is the version with darken and desaturate yellow background, linear burn some more, a little looser crop and increase midtone contrast.

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