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    Steven Kersting
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    When I saw the black swans I immediately thought that I wanted to do a Low-key image....The swans were not very cooperative. I had to use a higher angle to use the water as a cleaner BG. I probably should have hung out longer and tried for more angles/positions as the pose isn't ideal I think....

    So, what do YOU think of this one?


    D7000, 70-200 f/2.8 @ 130mm, f/8, 1/1000, and ISO too high @ 1100.

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    Steven, Nice low key look. I like the pose and of course the subject! I might have given just a touch more room on the bottom and right if it were mine but that is just a matter of opinion. The feathers on the back look great. Nice sharp face and eye. Hey one of my favorite bird shots was ISO 3200.

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    Steven Kersting
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    Thanks!
    Here's my "other version"...I'm not sure which I prefer but I keep going back to this one even though it is so much darker.


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    Great idea, Steven, and it works very well for the subject. Comparing the two versions, I think I prefer the darker BG in the second one, but the swan looks too dark to me in that one. Maybe something in between would be best? I agree with Denise on more room to the right and bottom.
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    Thanks. I was thinking the brighter bird created too much contrast in a single color range... To me it looked a bit to much like it was "pasted in". But I like the image enough to keep tweaking it.

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