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    Northern Pintails in courtship flight Llano Seco NWR 1/2500 f4 ISO200 D300 w 200mm f2 2x TC

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    I like the behavior captured Chris. Birds are sharp for the most part, not easy when there are 4 of them. My problem with the image is that there's no bird that anchors the image visually; I'm not sure where to look. Most of my attention goes to the pair on the left; I almost think this would be a better image if you removed the birds on the right and recropped for the new composition. I also think that you can go a little brighter and bring up the shadows a bit.
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    great critique by Doug, images like these are tough since the birds usually merge and often they don't all have a good wing position and are not on the same focus plane
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    I'm not sure what happened in PP but the birds look pasted onto the sky. Too much NR perhaps??

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    Here is a redit bringing up exposure and shadow. There is no noise reduction other than in camera. I did think about removing some canvas between the 2 groups to keep them all together for the theme of the shot. thank you for the feedback
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    Last edited by Chris Knight; 12-24-2011 at 02:25 AM.

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