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    remask, Adjust & simplify.

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    This has a lovely, dreamy feel to it, Mitch. I like the effect on the water particularly. I think if it were mine, I might try to crop such that the horizon isn't in the center. And I think it might need just a tiny CW rotation.

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    Mitch, nice application of Simplify. I like the water texture and colors, the clouds are cool, I'm not so sure about the washboard cloud pattern masking the sun. I might blend that in a bit, but it's your call. Maybe a slight CW rotation, also. Nice bird formation.

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    Very cool feather and wing cloud formations, Mitch! I like the image elements, processing and comp very much but wish the geese had a bit more backlighting. The direction of flight and the flow of the clouds and water is a perfect combo.

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    Mitch, Ditto the rotation. I agree with Steve regarding the geese and I wonder if the sky image could stand on it's own. Nicely seen.

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    Thanks Maureen, Jay, Denise, and Steve for your comments. Here is a repost incorporating your suggestions.

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    Mitch, It does look better. This morning when I looked at it again I was thinking maybe losing the second from last bird on the left. Groups of three, five, etc... seem more powerful. Just a last minute thought.

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    Hi Mitch. Great repost. I like Denice's idea as something to try. This aspect ratio is a winner!

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    Denise,

    Your comment that odd numbers (3, 5, ect.) are more powerful is really interesting ( I like to look for things like that). I have to watch for it and see if it holds.

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    Mitch

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