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    Default Morning pintails

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    I got this one last winter, they are just showing up here now.
    Canon 7D 1 - 400 5.6, HH, 7.1 at 1/1600 ISO 400
    My buddy, the state migratory bird biologist, calls them "God's Duck" and they are majestic.
    I really like to oof hen behind him, and the "dark" around both birds. This was just as the sun was coming up and not post processing. PP was just a slight crop and adding some brightness. I wish I knew had to make subjects stand out like this.
    I wish I had not cut off the top of his head in the reflection but it doesn't bother ME that much, you?
    As always, please make comments as it always results in a better image.

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    Excellent creation with lovely BG.Loved the morning beautiful lights on birds.

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    Nice image Stan! The head reflection is so close to being in the frame that I want to see all of it. I added canvas and created a head reflection with PS and liked the result. I would clone out the two white dots in front of the ducks. Still a beauty as presented.
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    I really like the contrast between birds and bg/fg in this one. Very well done. I do see some noise in bg and fg so may want to take care of that also. Nice poses also.

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    Great Shot! I love the light. I really like the play between the tack sharp male and the soft female. As far as the shadow, I might try to soften that a bit or crop it a bit (maybe exclude the head).

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    Nice shot....I like the light here and the dark BG. good job on exposing. Small area looks hot but might be a jpg issue. these situations are tricky. I dont mind the cut reflection. You need a round of selective sharpening

    If this was captured early morning, a warmer white balance might make it look more dramatic....and true to reality?

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    a quick repost. Let me know if you like this. Starting from full-sized RAW will be better of course.

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    Maybe it's my monitor at work but I can't see any difference so I'll look at home in a couple days.
    Did you just adjust the temp? Certainly sounds like a good idea to try, thanks for your efforts.
    And thank you all for you comments. I'm going to add just a touch of canvas and see what it looks like as well.

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    Open the same thread in two tabs, scroll in one to my image and then look side-by-side. I (a) applied a warming filter (b) removed a catchlight (c) applied selective sharpening. masked areas that would have looked oversharpened (d) also removed the tiny white speck on the left side

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    Duh, thanks, now I see some of the changes but I doubt my monitor here is well calibrated.
    thanks again for your time.

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    Love the way these guys emerge from the darkness. I'm not often a fan of oof bg birds, but this one works handsomely. Kaustaubh addressed several of my issues (catchlight, temperature). Wish it were possible to tweak a little more out of the dark tail, but probably not possible. I'd be tempted to take just a slivver off the bottom so one doesn't look for the whole head reflection.

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