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Very cool shot, Andrew. I like the processing, gives it a 3d feel.
I like it as is, but would prefer it cropped at the bottom just above the FG rocks.
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I too like it and would play with eliminating the center foreground rock; keeping the other foreground rock.
Cheers, Jay
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Andrew - the b&w treatment works well and augments the power of the swirling water. I like it as is but agree with Dan and Jay on an alternate crop.
TFS,
Rachel
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Thanks for the feedback. I will play with various options and may reposition if ocean doesn't try and claim me and my gear
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As mentioned, the foreground rock sticks out, also the right side top dark spot does. But it still works for me. I love the shades of gray, the subtle tones in the left long rock is real nice. You can see the pock marks in the rock, a bonus. The long exposure makes a great alternate view. But if you can go back, keep safe while doing so. Just zoom in some and keep the full frame. I bet this makes a nice 12x18 print!
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Getting the framing of the BG rock is a master-stroke; well done.
In the FG, either crop all the rocks in the bottom out or clone out the clipped one in the center.
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Hey Andrew,
Agree about the rocks but the conversion works and the recommended twekas wil take it over the top.
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Thanks for all the great suggestions .
This is as shot so have room to crop and maybe remove the fg rocks. @ Grady this is a really great section of my local coast line. I will next use a 24-105mm zoom to capture the same scene but will need to wait for the high tides again for the water surge. I have an image in mind as the sun sets which i am working on getting. as for the comp Robert, it was what i based the frame on and hope to use it again at various focal lengths........the hike is what limits the gear i take so its a work in progress.......... I hope to post some other images after sunset soon :) Roman thanks for the kind comments
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Hi Andrew, the rocks and the framing of them is perfect. I'd try to create a comp with the foreground rocks unclipped if at all possible and one with just surging water in the foreground. B&W conversion here is lovely.
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I like Jay's suggestion...
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Thanks for commenting Jay.
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Hi Andrew,
This is a beautiful image. I would definitely include the rocks in the foreground as it would add the necessary foreground interest and then you will have a winner.
Well done and thanks for sharing,
Mark.
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Really nicely composed image, Andrew, and perfect for going B&W. Has a strong impact. Love the contrast of textures & tones, between the rough dark rock, and soft water. Would have to compare the different suggestions to one another to know which is best, but still nicely executed!
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Late to this one, mate...love the framing of the rock as Robert pointed out. Also dig the B&W treatment and the compelling mood. I agree on cropping some off the bottom...