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    Photo taken early in the morning. I am missing data due to computer crash EOS 1D MK III, 500mmL F4, 0 IS

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    Nice atmospherics, mood, and lighting. I am unsure about the composition, perhaps do you have a little more FG water, and some canvas to the right of the cattle?

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    Great colours and composition. I am one that enjoys the negative space so think its great as is.......

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    I like the mood from the mist and the light. Just enough detail coming through. I think it works as is but would also be effective as more of a pano with about a third of the negative space cropped from the top.

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    I agree that more of a pano as well as a bit more room on the bottom and a bit behind would have better proportioned the image.

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    Love the warm moody light and the empty space. Agree that more space at the bottom would have helped...
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    Hi Geir,
    I would just add a little bit more space at the bottom and you will have a wonderful image. The space and the mist add to the image.
    Thanks for sharing and best wishes,
    Mark.

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