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Melissa:
This is quite nice, with a different perspective than we usually see. The combination of the light and your post makes the subject pop. Despite the merge of head and wing, they still separate well visually.
Like the clouds
I do like the second gull in the BG. Suspect some would prefer it without.
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Randy
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Melissa, I like the warm colours in this - your recovery has turned out very well. I do like this inflight posture, and the clouds certainly add interest. Sharp where it counts.
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The wide angle makes this one special. Sweet image. I'm one that finds the OOF bird distracting.
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I like the clouds and the soft colours. I would have two versions, with and without the BG bird.
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Excellent pose, and the perspective provided by the short focal lenght is special. Your processing looks good. Like Alan, I'm another in the "second gull is distracting" camp
Very well done Melissa...perfect for the theme.
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Hi Melissa, Love the pose here, one of my favorites for in flight shots. The dangling feet and flared tail put this over the top for me. I could go either way with the second gull. It does balance the shot IMO. Keeps my eyes looking throughout the whole picture. Very very nice. Keep them coming!
Gary.
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Love the bird, the pose, and the 2nd bird too. Love that the head is nicely positioned against the white tertials of the far wing. I would love to see it with a tad less saturation and a tad less contrast.....
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Melissa,
Wow this has a really great feel to it, Love the unique and interesting pose making this very dramatic. The image has great depth to it as well, I like both images and agree I would have them both, however I think I prefer the repost. sensational work!
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Better. Here's a tip: compare the original image with the optimized image before closing your master file in Photoshop (or wherever). If it looks a bit garish by comparison, tone it down. It only took me a decade of doing digital to learn that lesson. I have recently set my ACR defaults to 0 for both Vibrance and Saturation and lowered Brightness to 25 and Contrast to 13.....
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Wonderful image. Love the pose, excellent head angle, real nice light and background. I prefer the last repost.
Well done.
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Originally Posted by
Arthur Morris
Better. Here's a tip: compare the original image with the optimized image before closing your master file in Photoshop (or wherever). If it looks a bit garish by comparison, tone it down. It only took me a decade of doing digital to learn that lesson. I have recently set my ACR defaults to 0 for both Vibrance and Saturation and lowered Brightness to 25 and Contrast to 13.....
Thanks for your comments, Artie. You make excellent points here. When tempted to make the image "pop" more, I sometimes go heavyhanded on the Contrast and the Vibrance, and need to learn to hold back more! Comparing the two side by side will help rein me in...
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Fabulous image Melissa! I like the 2nd bird in the frame. The last repost is my favorite.
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