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    Default Calla Lily#2

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    I like this one more than earlier one .. nice full flower and less leaves. well compose bob.

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    Your doing great with these Calla images...this one is another beauty! I think all this needs is a little spot cleanup on the flower, a minor amount of brightening of the whites, maybe with a selective color adjustment and about 10% cropped from the left....enough to get the center of the flower closer to the LL ROT position. It looks good but with a few adjustments it should look great!

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    Hi Bob. Ken has already done a nice job of covering my thoughts on this one so I won't repeat. A couple tweaks and this image will shine!

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    Very nicely done, Bob, love the shapes and detail, and I think the shape of the green leaf above really adds to flow of comp. Good suggestions by Ken. Nice work!

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    I like how the curve of the leaf parallels the curve of the upper part of the flower. The white stands out against the dark greens. Agree with Ken re. cleanup and crop.

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    Cleaned up and cropped........Thanks for the feedback!

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    That made a difference!

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    Repost looks great. I like the dark BG and the leaves, sharp where it needs to be. Well done.

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