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    While on our way home from Bisita Iglesia during the Holy Week, we saw the sun unrealistically large on the horizon. We stopped for a while and took some photos. In a minute or so, the sun was already invisible.

    Golden Kiss. The setting sun gives a golden kiss to coconut trees in a town in Laguna before finally disappearing into the horizon. The bluish specks at the bottom are lights coming from houses. Santa Cruz, Laguna, Philippines

    40D, 400 f/5.6 L, ISO 400, f/8, 1/640 sec, single manual exposure, handheld, cropped

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    I like it; I would remove the lights from the houses as they detract from the silhouette. Alternatively, I think you should crop half of the foreground as it is just negative space.
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    Mark, I agree the "large" sun made for a nice photo. I noticed that a curves adjusment of the mid tones brings out some latent colors in the sky, I'd consider going back and selectivley bringing up the tones/colors of the sky. Also, RE the lights in the bottom half of the image, I agree, clone them out.

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    Hi Mark, nice big sun here and i love the silhouetted palm trees. Agree with Jay's suggestions. I think I would be tempted to crop just above the lights from the houses.

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    Mark, I agree with the above.

    Some crop from the bottom, a some curves adjustment to bring out color in sky. Nicely seen scene.

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    Got to check this thread just now.

    Thanks for the comments, everyone. I can see how a curves adjustment will bring out the colors in the sky. Will try them out when I find time to reprocess the photo.

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