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    I have not found time in recent weeks to either go out to shoot some landscapes or dig some from the archives - so this past weekend's break to the South African Highveld Escarpment was a welcome one. Even though the main goal was R&R with old friends and the weather was shoddy, I managed to sneak in some photography.

    This area contains all 3 major types of rock formations.

    This is a brief moment of breakthrough sunshine in otherwise dreary conditions at sunset. I was shooting in an entirely different direction when I felt the warmth of the sun on my cheek...I turned around and quickly tried to strike a few compositions before it sank behind the clouds again.

    All critique welcome...

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    Hi Morkel, beautiful sunburst in this one. Love the rugged terrain here...my kinda place. My only nit is the orange lichens on the rocks look a little too saturated. Nice capture!

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    I too like the sunburst here Morkel. Am I right in thinking this is a result of the F22 or did you have a filter to achieve this effect. The rock to the right provides a nice 'draw' into the image/towards the sun....

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    Thanks for your comments Andrew and Don.

    The sunburst is due to the diaphragm design of the 14-24mm lens. Each lens' burst is unique, but this lens has a special one indeed.
    And yes - it was due to the aperture of f22. I tend to get sunbursts at f16 too, but they look best at f22 on all wide angle lenses I've owned.
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    Beautiful image with rich colors, Morkel. I love how the rocks lead the view to the sun.

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    Mate, the only thing I would do to take it from a GREAT image to a FANTASTIC image is crop the sky by 50% The lighter portion of the sky at the top takes away the dramatic presentation. The lower rocks create a wonderful path to the sun burst. I like the dotted yellow flowers like a wee one tip toeing up the glade. Perhaps, only perhaps, you should burn just a drop the lower RH yellow lichen to tone the dot down as it does grab the eye. Having type all this I just went back and did that to. WDYT?
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    Sweet composition and sunburst. Agree with Jay about cropping out some of the sky. Very nice work in a small window of time.

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    Thanks for the kind comments, everyone.

    Jay - I quite like the hues in the sky...plus the way the OP is framed it places the ridge line on the top ROT horizontal which is a strong point for me when shooting vertical landscape compositions. I might investigate taking off about 1/3 to 1/2 of what you cropped off...
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    Morkel - the sunburst is great and I like the comp. Maybe a crop to just below your watermark in the OP?

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    Thanks Rachel...I think that might be the best crop...
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