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    Canon500D, 400 f 5.6, 1/400 sec, f /7.1, iso 400.

    We used "calling technique" to attract Wren.



    C&C always Most Welcome. Thanks for looking.

    http://kasra1817.persiangig.com/IMG_2691_5.jpg
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    Kasra, I like the inquisitive pose, as he has certainly responded to your calling. The angle of the pose is not ideal - getting him to pose at least parallel to you will help with your comp, as well as waiting for him to turn his head slightly towards you. I realise this is not always possible, as we have to take what we get. Your BG is great, and for this pose, I would consider a vertical crop.

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    Although I like the look on the bird's face, I wish you could have more of a side view of the bird. I am wondering if this bird is oversharpened. Is this the way the feathers looked?

    You have a great background on this photo.
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    Lovely background and great detail. Looks oversharpened to my eye.

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    Kasra,
    I like the pose, open bill & BG. Great suggestions by Stuart.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stuart Bowie View Post
    Kasra, I like the inquisitive pose, as he has certainly responded to your calling. The angle of the pose is not ideal - getting him to pose at least parallel to you will help with your comp, as well as waiting for him to turn his head slightly towards you. I realise this is not always possible, as we have to take what we get. Your BG is great, and for this pose, I would consider a vertical crop.
    Stuart,Thank you very much for your helpful comments.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Marina Scarr View Post
    Although I like the look on the bird's face, I wish you could have more of a side view of the bird. I am wondering if this bird is oversharpened. Is this the way the feathers looked?

    You have a great background on this photo.
    Marina,You're right when i was once again reviewed . it is too sharp.

    After this I'm trying to correct.

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