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Petros - I agree about the leaf - it looks like the bird sees it as a threat! I like the wing spread and the way the head is looking at the leaf. I think the underside of the bird as a bit on the dark side and I think a mild round of NR on the two wings could help.
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I like the pose and light but I'm on the fence about the leaf. What saves it is that the bird does appears to be looking at it but I'm still not sure.
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Just a matter of taste , but if it were mine , I would get rid of the leaf. Sweet image either way.
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Great wing position, and love the crossed legs. I would move the tern a little higher in the frame, and remove the grass.
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Hi Petros, I see your point about the leaf, but I would still remove it. Had it been a cluster of leaves anchoring the bottom right then that would have been better than a single strand jotting out of nowhere. It's a tough decision though as removing it does create a bland BG. Dynamic pose, I do wish the left wing was open more.
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Thank you Arthur. I like the lighter version even if it is too light compared to what I saw. Did you use the Levels adjustments (moving the center point) or Curves adjustments (lifting the curves line) in order to light the image in the first place? I just wonder which is the best way to do it.
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YAW. Terns are pretty much white birds :). Either would work but Curves gives more control. Even after I pulled up the curve I used Tim Grey Dodge and Burn to lighten the shaded side of the bird. I should have added that everything I did here is detailed in Digital Basics.
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