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    An avocet shot one morning this last spring on the Dutch island of Texel.

    I also have a version with the reflection, but I thought I would post this for now.

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    Neat bird, good job with the exposure. Good details in the plumage. I wouldn't mind more room above, and the water to be a little bit bluer (easy to tweak in "Selective Color"). I also see some dark halos along the back and tail...did you perhaps use the burn tool with some touched-up areas spreading into the BG?

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    Thanks Daniel. It would be pretty easy to add some canvas above and tweak the blue.

    I see what you mean about the dark patches, but I did not burn there. Indeed, I went back to the raw and they also appear there. Not sure what it may be.

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    excellent exposure. beautiful bird, shooting and subject angle are pretty good.

    agree that room above will help. it always gets tricky with such long legged birds in water. You made a good choice in the field as adding canvas below would be more difficult than above.

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    Very nice image of a beautiful bird. Nice exposure and detail. I like the feathers in the beak. Agree with more room above and colour tweak. There seems to be a dust spot in front of the bird, about half way to the left side at the level of the top of the legs.

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    Thanks Kaustubh and Dan.

    Good spot Dan. Not a dust spot, but an oof small object on that water that I will still remove.

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    Nice soft light good work on the whites and I love the blue color of the water ripple. Good eye Daniel those spots are strange. Did you maybe use the adjustment tool in raw that maybe bled over?

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    Thanks again. Here is a repost with a bit more space.

    Still can't find the source of the dark areas. No sliders that might do this were touched in ACR. If I had a bit more time I would try and clean it up manually, but for now I have to rush to work.

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    excellent light with a nice low angle, good exposure too
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    Beautiful image. Love the pose, exposed very well, and the repost is a lot better.
    Well done.

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    Love the bird and an overall quality image. Why not a vertical capture?
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    Thank you to all.

    Artie, I also have a vertical shot of this, I just decided to post the horizontal here.

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