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    Taken in Arsanjan, South of Iran.
    7D,400 2.8IS plus 1.4II, F 5.6, Iso 400, 1/2500s.
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    Mohsen,

    Very beautiful sparrow image. Loved that yellow throat.
    Good clean bg and nice sharp image.
    Wish the perch behind was not intersecting the bird.

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    Beautiful bird, I like the dab of yellow on the throat. Excellent IQ overall, I would just darken the perch and I too wish it didn't intersect the bird's face.

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    Cute bird. Nice sharp image with good pose. Nice smooth BG. Agree with comments about perch being behind bird.

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    great pose and eye contact, the exp is fine good work, the perch is not so good, too distracting

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    A bunch of Quick Masks with Layer Masks, Select Color and Linear Burn on the bright branch, some Clone Stamp Tool. And a bit of Eye Doctor work. All as detailed in Digital Basics.
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    Thanks everyone for useful comments.

    & special thanks to Artie for the time you spent improving this shot.

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    YAW Moshen, Even more could have been done with this one but I did not want to push it; I just got rid of the most obtrusive branches.
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    thx for the example Artie

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    Whoa artie's repost takes it to another level and i can say now the intersection of that brach's power went down to almost 40% with some removal.

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