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    Brendan Dozier
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    Took some shots of this interesting glass & textured steel sculpture at the botanic garden. Added some PB oil & blur on BG.

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    Brenda, I really like the illusion of depth in this image; a wonderful pattern of lines and color and patterns. I wish there was a little more room on the right between the corner of the glass at the top and the border of the frame...it seems just a little tight...but everything else, to my eye, is a visual delight. Nicely seen!

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    Brendan, I love this. The colors and design are lovely. I wish the top piece of glass on the right side was a little sharper. Nice job with the filters, they add just the right touch!

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    Thanks John & Denise, much appreciated.

    John, let me go back and take a look regarding the right side, I think I cropped out a distracting piece on that side.

    Denise, yeah I wish that top piece was sharper too. I did selective sharpening, but that is about as good as I could get it without deteriorating. Took this with my macro lens and should of had some more dof.

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    Brendan, love the filtering and the colors here as well as the comp. Agree on the top pane's sharpness.

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    Hi Brendan, this one really caught my eye. Nice work on seeing the opportunity and capturing it. The processing looks great. Since you have the bg on a separate layer, I would suggest changing the color to one that is more compatible with the foreground colors. To my eye it looks like it's from a different palette. Nice job!
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    Thanks Kerry, that is a good idea. What color do you think would work best? I think I'm going to try and re-shoot this angle with more dof when I get a chance.

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    Thanks, Andrew, much appreciated!

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    Brendan, I really like the look you've gotten here. I agree with Kerry on a different bg color - something brighter
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