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    Default Small Stream Cascade, Rocks and Pine Needles

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    A different approach to a small woodland stream scene....

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    Hi Jim, interesting composition with both detail and softness going on. I like the rainbow of colors on the water and the jumble of foliage. I would be tempted to lighten the darkest areas a bit.
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    Can't decide between 'electrifying' or 'fairyland' to best describe the effect. Nicely done.

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    Jim, Welcome to OOTB! Very nice first attempt ? at Fractalius. I like everything about the image except for the bright white area at the base. It catches your eye and draws it from the rest of the scene. Maybe a small crop from the top.

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    Hi Jim, love the Fractalius effect on this scene and the colors too! Agree with Denise on the bright white area.

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    Very cool effect and composition, Jim, does have a dream like feel to it. Like the soft light and colors.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kerry Perkins View Post
    Hi Jim, interesting composition with both detail and softness going on. I like the rainbow of colors on the water and the jumble of foliage. I would be tempted to lighten the darkest areas a bit.
    I like the rainbow of colors on the water and the jumble of foliage. I would be tempted to darken the lightest areas a bit. :).
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