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    This is a 4 exposure HDR image processed in Photomatix using the Grunge preset. Then USM (thanks to Nick for the tip), then slight PB Oil Paint and finally a slight Fract. Rounded. This shop always has such interesting oriental items in their windows. I have some close-ups that I'm going to work on also. I'm not sure about the perspective. I'll be interest to see what you all think. This was taken with an 18-55mm lens.
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    Cheryl I'm not a big fan of HDR but I do like this with the PB oil over the top. I'm not sure about the branch on the side - I wish there was more of it or none at all but that's just me. I'm also not quite sure what is at the top of the frame - is that more branches?

    Beautiful texture of the bricks and the pops of color are very cheerful - they really set the mood!

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    I don't usually like HDR, but this is one case I think it works very well. The bright colors are beautiful, and I like the contrast of the blueish windows against the orange of the bricks. I think I would try to adjust the perspective so that the building appears straight. It also looks a little tight on the top and right side.
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    Hi Cheryl, nicley grunged and fracted too! I think the tree on the right works better with the top row of windows cropped out for a somewhat square crop, but that's just me. Nice work!

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    Cheryl, The processing looks nice. I'm not in love with the Spanish moss? at the top unless there was more. I love the stuff in the windows. Very neat subject and well presented.

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    Hi Cheryl, I like your processing with the grunge look. I go with Andrew's suggestion regarding cropping the top row of windows. This will accentuate the store windows more. Regarding the moss and the clipped tree on the rt I would prefer seeing more of it or none at all...

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    Cheryl, I like this a lot! great use of HDR for this brick building and the grunge effect is excellent. Wonderful colors. I agree with Christopher on using perspective to straighten the building. Excellent processing.

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    Love the colors and processing. I might try pulling the vertical lines a bit to make them parallel. But that may not really be that important with this image.

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    Nice job on this, Cheryl, like the detail and colors brought out with your treatment. Nicely composed and wonderful look to the bricks & window. Agree with Andrew on maybe cropping out the top line of windows.

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