Curiosity got the better of me today and I ventured across the border to visit Point Roberts. Not much there but I did enjoy the abundance of shore birds.
While I was packing up late afternoon, two Dunlin turned up right beside me and didnt appear timid so I got down on my belly on the sand and wet seaweed to take advantage of the opportunity.
I think it looks a wee bit drab presented as is so I would welcome some comments as to how i can improve it.
I love Dunlins, and this is a nice one. Looks to me as if the focus is just a tad forward of the eye. Beak is sharp, but back of head is soft -- might be helped with a little selective sharpening there. You might consider removing the white spot on bill. As for lack of sparkle, I wonder whether your color temp was a bit cool on this. You might try warming a bit, and adding a modest s-curve. I'd probably protect the background from added contrast though. I love the personal feel to this image.
This is beautiful upclose capture. I will add some USM to the bird and try to tone down the bg uneven patches. Especially the big bright vegetation just on left of the leg.
Thanks guys. I ran some selective sharpening on the head and removed the spot of sand on the bill. Also warmed it up a little by adjusting the blue in curve adjustment. I need to go back and look at the RAW files. I must have got blasted by the wind when this was taken resulting in it being soft.
Last edited by Jamie Douglas; 10-05-2011 at 12:43 PM.
Pt Roberts Dunlin
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