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Gary, What a beautiful fall image. I love the layers of color in the background and your title is perfect. Only thing I might play with is trimming a bit from the top, which will move the birds higher in the frame.
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Beautiful image and perfect title like Grace said. Well done.
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Both birds sharp. EXP good. Wing position of the adult is perfect as we have a nice view of the far underwing. Wish the the front bird were in the full downstroke. I see no reason at all to crop from the top.... One or two light spots in the BKGR and the one branch above the birds might merit your attention.
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Artie, When I do a browser scroll and elimiate those fringes of light green foliage that border the top edge, I find that my eye has no reason at all to wander from Gary's beautiful subjects. I am talking about a very minor amount. That also puts the birds slightly higher in the frame which I find pleasing as well. Thank you for making me verbalize (in writing
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Understood. I would much rather deal with the light areas at the top than have more room below the birds than above. Especially since they are headed up
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Thank you all for your comments appreciate your time!
Gary.
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Gary:
Very nice pair here, nice to see them in formation.
Touch of fall creeping in.
I like the juvi showing his developing plumage.
Hope to get out this week sometime.
Cheers
Randy
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