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    Taken in Feb this year down in Fort Myers, FL, in early morning. BG is a pond that was misty. I wish the OoF grass wasn't there in the corner and that I had more room below. I'm also aware that it needs a CW rotation but not much I can do about that or I will lose the tail. But I liked the look back pose and the beauty of this elegant creature.
    Some cloning out of stuff in the water, sharpening, NR, contrast via Curves. Top and sides have been cropped a bit.
    Thank you for looking, all C & C most appreciated!

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    what a closeup.
    Yes to the rotation and oof grass blades and i think need more room too. But as you were upclose cant do much.

    with the fact of that. I will give contrast boost as it looks too flat and some USM as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mitalpatel View Post
    what a closeup.
    Yes to the rotation and oof grass blades and i think need more room too. But as you were upclose cant do much.

    with the fact of that. I will give contrast boost as it looks too flat and some USM as well.
    here's a repost with some USM (.3, 75) and a boost in contrast... better?

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    Love the mist, beautiful colors in the soft light on the bird and about the best HA you're going to get from this position.

    Agree that it looks a bit cramped on the left side.

    I would try and tone that grass down if at all possible.

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    Hi Melissa, you have a beauty here! It has a painterly look to it and I really love that! I agree about the image needing more space. Also, it does need more contrast. In Levels, move the center arrow over the right. You may have to lighten the image overall after that. Hope this helps!

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    Melissa:

    Nice look back pose, great color in the lores, good feather detail.

    Yes, too tight and the green is pretty strong. First approach from me would be to tone down the brightest green reed to match the darker ones, less attention getting that way( probably what Jim had in mind as well)

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    There is something about the softness of the morning light that does make this look like a painting. The colors, especially in the head, are lovely. The 2nd post is an improvement. I agree with others about the over-brightness of the green grass.

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    Melissa, I did a quick edit which included adding some contrast to the midtones and softening the brightness of the grass and neck area.

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    Amy, that looks much better! Thank you so much! You really made it pop. And that was a good idea to soften the brightness of the neck, that hadn't occurred to me.
    I could probably still reduce the brightness of the one lightest grass blade.
    Thanks to all for your comments.

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    The blacks did need some punch, glad Amy pointed it out. I think the image does not need rotation. One thing to have tried out in the field was to open up the aperture...wide open...to soften the grasses in the lower corner. It may have give a neat effect.

    BTW, great pose by the Anhinga...good job in waiting for the perfect head turn!!

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    Looks quite level to me. Amy's repost is a huge improvement. I love the green llc but would lose the horizontal yellow stalk cutting through the grass. Killer male and a beautiful image. Where?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Looks quite level to me. Amy's repost is a huge improvement. I love the green llc but would lose the horizontal yellow stalk cutting through the grass. Killer male and a beautiful image. Where?
    Artie, this was taken beside my in laws backyard pond at their home in East Fort Myers. I set up a blind and went out very early.

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    Thanks. Nice digs I imagine. :)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Thanks. Nice digs I imagine. :)
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    Love the pose and head turn Melissa. I was so wanting some contrast and thereit is in the repostof Amy's. (awesome PS work Amy) I really like how the birds tail touches the water . After seeing the bird pop more the grases work better for me as they seem softer now .

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    Thanks!

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    Melissa,

    Amy's version is what i had in mind for contrast boost. Superb frame again of that snake bird we call em but facial colors we miss here

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    great I like the repost with more contrast and would sharpen a bit more. very handsome bird!
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