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    Default Pied Wheatear in Flight II

    Camera Model Canon EOS 450D
    Owner's Name Morteza Nemati
    Shooting Mode Aperture-Priority AE
    Tv( Shutter Speed ) 1/2500
    Av( Aperture Value ) 6.3
    Metering Mode Evaluative Metering
    Exposure Compensation -1/3
    ISO Speed 400
    Lens EF400mm f/5.6L USM
    Focal Length 400.0 mm
    Image Quality RAW
    Flash Off
    AF Mode One-Shot AF



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    Morteza:

    Excellent job of stopping this fellow. Well exposed, sharp, nice full back wing position. The feet are great.

    The composition works well, although since he is landing, might give a bit more below if available.

    From a fine tuning of the image, if you feel comfortable doing so, I would be tempted to either slightly darken the luminosity of the large tan clump in LRC or even consider cloning in a little of the green pattern from above to soften it a bit.

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    loved this image you made.

    Randy has pointed all the points ..

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    Randy has made some good points, and while we're at it I would do the same to the bright OOF line touching the belly.

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    Excellent timing Morteza. You did it very well. TFS

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