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    Default Indian Pitta #1 (Ranthambore)

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    Camera: Canon 40D + TC 1.4 ExII
    Lens: EF 500 F/4
    Aperture: 7.1
    Exposure: 1/100 sec
    Bias : +1/3
    ISO: 800

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    Ishmeet bhai,

    Excellent speciment of birdie and that about to lift pose.
    I find the sharpness overdone.

    Liked the sepia tones of bg. May be chopping off from right say about an inch will be good and adding same space to left.

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    Nice looking bird, but definitely over sharpened. I agree on shifting the bird to the right in the frame.

    It may be natural, as you haven't mentioned using flash, but I would like to see the strong second catchlight toned down or removed.

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    Womderful detail. The bird is a bit centered and I wish for a head turn.

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    Very well exposed. Would like to see this cropped to a square.

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    Beautiful image with lovely colours I love the pose too here , the sharpness seems to be overdone

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    Awesome image , Agree on everybody's comment on placing the bird on the right of the frame and wished for better HA .

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    I agree with the agressive sharpening, comp suggestion, and need for a better HA. Nice colours, great perch and beautiful BG.

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    Thank you guys for your comments, much apreciated. Will repost a corrected image in a day or so.

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    The pitta does look OS and the compo is a centred one . Placing it to the right would enhance this one !!

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    I am reposting the image after reducing the SHARPENING and changing the crop. However, I have not been able to do justice to the
    cloning that I did to stretch the canvas. I will be redoing the image completely, but just wanted to repost the corrections to know if it works
    this way.

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    Sorry I posted the wrong image in pane #11....my appologies.

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