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    Hi everyone,

    This lone Sanderling was at the edge of the lake. It was so tame such that it was almost next to our feet as a group of us were walking along the shoreline of the lake.

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    It is a juvie that is why it was so tame. Do you have more room all around (esp. front, back, and top).
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    It is a juvie that is why it was so tame. Do you have more room all around (esp. front, back, and top).
    Yes, I do have some room in the front, back, and top as I was using the center focus point around the neck area. Is the cropping too tight? Thanks for any advice!

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    Ray:

    Sharp, well exposed, nice pose, like the little ripples.

    Yes, Artie was implying that it is too tightly cropped. I would start by adding a modest amount in front, and adjust the other sides for best balance, but keeping a relatively greater amount in front of the bird (compared with rear)

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    Thanks Randy. You got it right . Ray, I look forward to the repost.
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    Recomposing as per the suggestion offered will make this a real winner. Love the pose, the blues, and especially the small clear wavelet over the foot.

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    Hi,

    I was going to suggest exactly the same, but Randy and Artie beat me to it. I like the raised foot.

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    Initially I thought the cropping as seen above was fine. I've seen similar type of cropping by some of the (unnamed) professionals on Flickr as well, so i thought it was okay, but I guess not. It actually makes sense if I look at the above photo when I'm standing from a few feet away from my monitor. It's good to get some consensus from the BPN members.

    Here's re-edit with the above suggestions. I added a bit more in all sides, especially in front of the bird, and I don't think I can add any more in the front. Hope this edit is better than the above photo.

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    very nice pose and details. I like the repost
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    Raymond, The repost is a huge improvement but I'd like it better with the bottom cropped as in the original..... Not much learning going on at Flickr.... BTW, thanks a stack for your membership support! I love the wavelet. You might wish to tone down or eliminate some of the brighter whitish rocks at the bottom, just a few.
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    Ray:

    For me, the bird fits much more comfortably in the frame in the repost than the original. Just too cramped in original.

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    Ray
    This is huge fella Seeing life size image first time and am just loving this.

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    Thanks a bunch guys!

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