I like it. It is very painterly. Pointing the camera down a bit would have helped. As is, I would take some off of the top. I do not mind the oof stuff in the foreground.
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Gary I like the concept of the bird "peeking" through the trees but the noise here suggests that it was a big crop or shot under very low light conditions. A touch of low level fill flash may have helped. I might also crop an inch off the top.
I also like the peeking through branches look. Hard to achieve successfully though. Cropping some off the top would be good, as would be toning down the few bright streaks in ULC.