Wonderful idea here and well executed. i like the sun's place relative to the pews and cross. I like the light reflection on the tops of the pews. I like the layering of the hills in the BG
I was thinking that the top of the roof with the triangle showing through to the sky needed to some to a point at the top of the shadow, and I still feel that would be preferred, however when I browser cropped to the top of the horizontal roof beam, the resulting image was powerful indeed and to me preferrable.