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    Remask & simplify. Clouds from airliner window.

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    Mitch I like the dark mood and the pano crop. I may have placed the bird down a hair and to the right a little if it were mine. Nice job w/ the filters.

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    Mitch, you nailed the clouds on this one...beautiful lighting, beautiful processing...and, like Denise, I like the pano crop. To my eye, Denise makes a good suggestion regarding the placement of the bird....this has all the makings of a great image.

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    Mitch, the title say it all and the cloud is awesome! Very nice processing and another vote to get the bird down a bit and right. Excellent work.

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    Mitch...another great composite with great light! I too suggest moving the bird down and too the right just a bit. Also, have you tried flipping it so it reads left to right?

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    Thanks Denise, Indranil, and Bob,

    Here is a rework positioned down and to the right. I also tried flipping it in a left to right orientation as suggested by Bob.

    What do you all think?

    M.

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    Denise,

    Thanks for the suggestions. Here is a version lower and to the right.

    M.

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    I don't think the left to right works? What do you all think?

    M.

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    Hi Mitch, I'm a bit late........i like the OP frame with the suggestions made. The pan look in the OP with bird a bit down and to the right seem the best to me. Doesn't matter which it reads to me, left to right or the other. Nice looking image.

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    Wow Mitch, your getting pretty good at these composites...I like the last version with the changes you made...Thanks for sharing..

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    Mitch, I love the 2nd repost (Pane #7). I don't know why I like it better on that side but I'm right-handed so maybe that's it Great job on this one!!
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    Mitch, I'm casting another vote for the original post with crop suggestion by Denise. Really nice look, super colors and excellent technical work.
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    Mitch I vote for pane #7 also, looks great!

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    Thanks Denise, John, Indranil, Bob, Jay, Paul, Cheryl and Kerry for all your suggestions.

    When I went to make a print for myself, I decided on #7.

    Mitch

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