Originally Posted by
Jay Sheinfield
Hi Art,
To my eyes this building looks close to dead center in the frame and facing left, and, with the other building, the comp feels a bit heavy to the left. If it were mine I would take a bit off the top to further play to the height of the structure, and about half-inch or so on the right side. This moves the building to the right, facing left and evicts part of that compression effect from the lower right side of the building, and IMO would add a bit more depth to the image. Otherwise, the colors are lovely. And the sharpness, considering the 800mm exposure time is impressive. It is still impressive as presented. I intend on reading your Lesson Learned bit.