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    Default A continuation to yesteray

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    Canon EOS ID Mark IV
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    I hope I don't bore you all with this. Just 1 more to go . By the way the blur is achieved on camera. just a round of NR on the Bg. Also Canvas extended a little at the bottom.
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    Another stunning image! I think I even prefer this one over the previous shot. I am not sure about the composition as I feel there is a bit too much room on the right and top IMHO.

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    This is really a spectacular shot. I agree with Ofer about the comp, can you try posting a version that is a bit cropped off top and right? I think it would better showcase this marvelous bird and capture.

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    Default Repost of the above image With suggestions implemented

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    Dear Ofer and Melissa,

    Please do let me know if the crop works.
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    Hi Ramesh,
    Here is a quick repost of your OP with the following: cropped a bit off the top and right, added a bit to the left. Quick fix of the distracting elements in the BG and a slight levels adjustment.

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    Thanks a lot Ofer, Love the version you have sent.
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    Ramesh, your repost was a definite improvement, but Ofer's really tops it off.

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    Hi Ramesh, excellent IQ here, and I do like the landing posture. Overall well exposed, sharp, and that BG is a killer. IMHO, I prefer your OP. If the FG grass was in focus, I would have added a touch to the bottom.

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    Dear Stuart as I was almost at the level of the grass lying and shooting on my elbows, the FG Grass Is OOF
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    Lovely low angle action shot Ramesh . Agree with the comment on extra space in front of the bird .

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    Great Angle here Ramesh, loved the light and colors here... nicely done.

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    Ramesh, I like the comp in the OP. prefer that extra room in the front. superb shot...well done at that low angle...colors, sh, BG...awesome.

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