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    Default Pre-dawn Snowy

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    A snowy egret photographed before sunrise at Little Estero Lagoon. 20D, 500 f/4 +1.4X, 1/180, f/5.6, ISO 400. Converted the RAW image at Cloudy WB and adjusted saturation to enhance the color in the water - but still keep it a pastel effect. I would be interested in what others think of this look.

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    Looking good Steve That is a magical place pre-dawn !!! Looks like conditions were perfect Love the still water If anything would go brighter Next time try including the exposure compensation !!! Excellent color and feel !!!

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    Great light and fantastic colors,nice composition too!

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    Very nice, simple image. I like the color and exposure just fine. I would, however probably get rid of the sticky uppy bit in front of the bird.

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    Hey Steve, I took a minute and made seem very rough adjustments (no comments on my PS work!! I only did as an example :D) I really like this. I think it would have much more impact if there were a bit more room at the bottom, and less at the top, like in the repost. I also lightened just the Snowy using a levels adjustment layer and masking the Snowy. You did a fine job making this image.

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    I probably would remove the little stick but other than that this is a very pretty image. Looks like you have a lot of room to go different ways to edit this if desired.

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    Thanks for your suggestions, Blake. I'll have to give that a try. :) The original does have more room at the bottom so I could go lower.

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    Steve this is a well captured image. The others have already offered some good advice and I like Blake's example re-work. Overall the soft colours in this image remind me of a pastel painting.

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    Wonderful head angle and pastels. Going VERT would have been a good plan for the virtual feet...

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    Either image version is OK. The pinkish colored bg is a huge plus in making this one work. Very artful, soft and inviting.

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