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Ram:
The fluffy bird is great fun, sharp and well exposed. Wish the tail wasn't clipped.
The back bird is enough out of focus and prominent enough that it distracts from Mr. Fluffy.
I might tone down the brightest light green areas below the second bird, which further draw the eye away from Mr. Fluffy.
Cheers
Randy
Last edited by Randy Stout; 09-07-2011 at 02:55 PM.
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I like the fluffy / scruffy look about these two
Nits covered.
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Lovely fluffy image , Ram . Randy is spot on with his suggestions .
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