Gotta love the light and specimen here...
I felt it was a bit 'too' yellow (and I know how intense African Golden Hour can get), but felt the yellow was oversaturated to the point where fine details were lost.
Here is a repost with slight colour adjustment done:
Saturation:
Yellow -7
Green -10
Color Balance:
-1;-1;+1 for shadows, midtones and highlights
Curious to know what you think Bhai? Lost the essence of what you wanted to convey?