Tough one Jon! I know you like to show the environs too but something about the two RH side taller grasses bug me. I do realize thet if you eliminate them, there would be a lot of negative space left.....so not quite sure what the answer is! REally nice job with the flight of the 2 though!
Thanks for the comments, ideally I would have been a little closer but they did not permit this, I decided to leave the grasses in and not crop much at all in order to show the "scene".