Some Simplify, a bit of grunge, and here ya go..........It's tight at the bottom, there was a fence there. Not sure I wanted to add canvass.....
Some Simplify, a bit of grunge, and here ya go..........It's tight at the bottom, there was a fence there. Not sure I wanted to add canvass.....
Last edited by Jay Sheinfield; 08-21-2011 at 04:23 PM.
Jay, I love the row of daisies leading up to the truck and the colors. I wish there were a little more detail in the clump right beside the truck's door (the foliage - the flowers look fine).
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Jay, I like the line of daisies and the composition is nice. I agree w/ Cheryl regarding the clump of vegetation.
Cheryl good catch on the clump! Here is more detail............Hope it works better.
Jay, the repost looks great!
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Jay, the repost looks very good...the foreground flowers, drawing your eye up through the composition, really make the image...it is a tight composition, but it works...I really like the lines of the BG wall as well. Nicely done.
Beautiful colors and composition. That line of Daisies leading to and into the old car are perfect--leading lines and contrast. That dash of blue is perfect. The repost, with more detail in the foliage near car, works really well. Very nice!!
Jay, Nice work on the repost.![]()
Hi Jay,
Your repost is fantastic,. Very, very nicely seen & processed.
Thank you for all the feedback. Cheryl, your comments made a big difference in the final image. You would love it out here!
Beautiful pastoral. The flowers lead into the pic. I don't think you want anything else on the bottom.
Yes to killer on the repost. Love, love, love the image design and the look. Only thing that bugs me slightly is that it is a tiny bit tight on the bottom flowers (where there is a merged flower in the BKGR that needs to go). All in all wonderful.
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Art, Thanks so much. I agree on the merged flower, it's a goner!![]()
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It does look better but only 1000 times better. The edges rule... You did a bang-up job. That purple flower rocks!
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