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    Taken in Pilanesberg Nature Reserve, South Africa...

    Equipment: Canon 7D and 500mm F4 L lens
    Settings:1/1600s at F5.6 and ISO 200

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    Rudi, I like it very much. Lovely detail and super smooth background make for a nice abstract. There is a small white spot on the black stripe at the 8 o'clock position from the eye which I'd get rid of.

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    Love the framing, colour & detail and super BG here Rudi.
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    A really cool image. Love the colors, detail and composition. It all works for me just fine. Well done,

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    Love what you've done with this one. It is different and powerful.
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    The sharp, fine details of this slice of zebra and the unusual composition make this an exquisite image. Very creative and well thought out and executed.

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    I love this! Very effective. Maybe just a tiny boost in contrast and colours. WDYT?

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    Thanks for the positive feedback everyone!

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    Hi Rudi, really like the concept behind this and the simplicity of the image.

    What you could try is to bring in both sliders in Levels (left & right) so they are just touching the base line, as this I feels adds a bit more pop to the image, however you can move them in more or less, just depends on personal preference. Do this as an adjustment layer as you can then just open the eye up a fraction, retaining that nice chestnut colour, but not to the point where you cann see your vehicle.

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    Lovely perspective here Rudi! Will work well as B&W too
    Some good suggestions by Steve...and I like Ofer's repost, though if I were to make one I would bump contrast a tad.
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    Rudi - well envisioned and carried out. The detail, color and bg are all great.

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    Followed Steve's advice... hope I have not overdone it... An improvement?

    Thanks for the help everyone?
    Last edited by Rudi van den Heever; 08-18-2011 at 09:53 AM. Reason: wrong image

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    Looks good to me Rudi, but you have the ultimate say, WDYT?
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    I like this a lot. Great BG and repost is tops...Very nice idea!

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    Thanks Dumay!

    Sure a great idea to make it "pop" Steve... New at CS5 and fist had to do some reading on adjustment layers after your post!

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    Great work here with the composition adn the repost...super shot Rudi
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    I really like this composition Rudi and the repost has the right amount of pop. Simple yet powerful image.

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    Absolutely love this... creative composition and the details look amazing against that nice background. Amazing image! I think the repost looks great.

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    Thanks for the postive feedback eveyone!

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    Rudi,

    Great out-of-the-box thinking here.

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    Thanks Robert! Difficult to please the BPN community!

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    Very creative image! Like the clean background. Really brings out the lashes.

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    Appreciated Dan!

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