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    A couple days ago I watched this guy preen for awhile and then caught him when he stretched open his "big mouth". He looks pretty scruffy to me; I think it is a juvenile GBH. I cropped away 50% to empathize the pose. Adjustments made in LR and PSE.

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    I like the crop and the pose. Did you do some cloning at the top of the head?

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    Thanks and good eye, Carole. I did nothing deliberately to the bird's head, but I did add a narrow strip of blue background at the top of the picture, above the head. In camera, I had framed my exposure too close up there.

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    Wendell, I like the idea you had for this image but the light was not right for you. The harsh light coming from the right cast shadows on parts of the bird and bright light on others, never a good situation. What Carole is seeing is a white line above the head of the heron that was probably part of the added canvas at the top. Did you use a shadows/highlights adjustment to the image? There is a dark halo around parts of the bird that is a common artifact of this adjustment.
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    Kerry, yes, I did use the shadows/highlights adjustment -- and it must have been too heavy-handed (though it was not apparent to me). Thanks for the observations, I always appreciate you thoughtful critiques . . . I'll see if I can be more careful on the next post.

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    Hi Wendell- Interesting behaviour and amazing colour in the mouth. Many birds seem to do something similar. Agree with Kerry's lighting comments. The highlight on the cheek looks burned- not easy to deal with (but easy to do in the field!!). I see a certain "waxiness" to the feathers and wonder if some noise reduction was done? I could be wrong and this is more of a Shadows and Highlights effect.

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    John, I did do some NR (Noise Ninja) and S/H in (PS Elements). I thought both were used sparingly. But if the result looks so unnatural, I must have been too heavy-handed. 'preciate your input, John . . .

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    Wendell, you have been doing really well with your images lately. This one just got away from you in the lighting department.
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