I think the flight pose you capture is pretty nice. The wings in a full down position is pleasing. I like the composition as it gives the bird space to fly into. . I also like the color of the sky in this capture. The bird appears sharp. Although the white at the base of the near wing are not over exposed,I think the image would be enhanced if they were toned down a bit. I wish the bird was flying / angling more toward the viewer. Thanks for sharing.
Your exposure looks good and you have a nice sharp bird. I would rather have seen this capture at less of an angle with the bird not flying away from you.