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    Default Weekly theme: Brown Pelicans

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    Pelicans processed in Topaz Simplify oil painting and clouds dropped in from another photo.

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    My kind of image (combining the best of two), nice wing position on lead bird, lovely effects on the sky. Well done

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    Very nice, Michael. I particularly like the effect on the sky!

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    Hi Michael! The sky looks great and as Paul said the wing position of the lead bird is wonderful. I might try to lighten a few areas of the Pelicans just a touch if it were mine. Well done.

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    I like it........the sky is beautiful. I agree with Denise on some lightening of birds, maybe brighten up the eye on the top Pelican a bit. A really nice in flight image.

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    Hey Michael,
    Great advice on lightening the birds selectively. Nice use of an added sky too!

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    Michael,

    Greetings. I like the color contrast (blue-orange) but might try a bit more luminance contrast on the birds, perhaps sharpening? I like the comp.

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    -Michael-

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    Thank you for all your comments and suggestions. I believe that the Oil Painting filter works best to produce a low contrast, softer, somewhat darker image. When I tried lightening or sharpening this version, I wasn't too happy with it. At some point, I will try a different filter treatment to see if there is something that works better.

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    Hi Michael, nice addition of the sky and I too like the wing positions of the lead bird.

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    Michael, I'm late to the party but I like this image..great job combining the two images, and I love the head position of the pelican on the left. My only suggestion would be to echo the others here in attempting to lighten selective areas of the two pelicans a bit...other than that, it's a really nice capture.

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