I love the pose!! I wouldn't mind a looser comp. I found the image a tad dark, and quite blue...for the repost I upped the midtones in "Levels", and added red and yellow to taste in "Color Balance".
Excellent contribution to the monthly theme. You know that you can select 'theme' in the drop-down when creating the post, right? I like Daniel's repost. So well timed. Such poses go especially well with the young ones. excellent shooting angle.